I- what?

I uhh... Then... uhh.. Yeah... What... Where?

I'm so confused.

I'm going to roll dice and base my score off that.

Cool Beans

Nice track. Only a few suggestions really. It kinda feels like the same song played twice 0:41 - 1:08 sounds identical to 1:50 threw 2:17 Not that it sounds bad, it sounds amazing. But its just more of the same really.
The little down time between those sounds good, except the synth that comes in around 1:35 seems a little missed placed.
Over all great job. Keep it up!

Not bad but not vary good either.

I liked the intro, but the build up took way to long to keep me really interested. And then when it did finally build up, it didn't change much. The synth got a little 'darker' and the bass kick got a little louder and muffled. I think its a great Idea for a track, but I think you need to work on it some more, maybe change up the melody a little after the build up, and definitely try a different kick.
Don't give up on this track though, its got a lot of potential.
-Erebus

Nice

Great work. The first few seconds of the intro feel kinda empty to me, but thats typical with most genres of electronic music.
The track has a real Mortal Kombat feel to it. Pretty bad ass if you ask me.